I can appreciate that the quote used is a real one. However the use of langauage is important if you are appealing to various cultures and audiences. The use of the word 'tenacity' may not be appropriate for some people. I think it needs to be in plain and simple language which most people can identify with. I think it is important to keep it really simple!!
On the other hand I think it is a good idea to include a section about the obstacles faced when going through the programme. Not so sure about the use of the word 'Setbacks'. I would prefer something like the obstacles to reaching your goal!! saying as a string of words makes it sound less daunting.
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Hi, I came across your blog, and wanted to ask you a few questions...
Since you have been on it, how much weight have you lost? Do you feel you are eatting healthier? You showed some concern about the possible side effects, have they affected you at all?
I would love to hear your responses.
Thanks and good luck!
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